Andrew won't beat me

Not to be outdone my our friend Andrew the blogger, I am going to post something new today too.

I have spent the last several hours not lifting weights or running, but rewriting my paper. Now I have to go to the store and get some ink for my printer and produce ten copies. Ten copies or nine? Anyway my printer is printing lighter and lighter words and now the last page I pulled off is barely legible. Cancel! Ah, why now. I have spent so much time editing and reprinting pages to edit that I now have to go read the articles to discuss in class tonight. Good thing it's a light load at work this morning so I can get everything accomplished.

Anyway my paper is now much more focused - just the first decade and mostly focused on my family and my dad and brother especially. I think the workshop really helped to zero in on what to write about. My first draft was much too expansive. This one I'm calling "My Two Freds" and I hope it reads better.

Thank you all for your feedback - very helpful with my rewrite!!